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Friday, September 2, 2011

About does this story sound interesting

does this story sound interesting?
I'm writing a zombie story called Undead Encounters here's the plot of the story and what i have so far. The rise of a zombie attack only happening in America. Doctors have been putting viruses in shots (without knowing) that cause severe damage to the brain and kills that person within two weeks of injection. That said person then comes back alive with a severe hunger for human flesh. Story revolves around 6 teenagers, a teacher, and a police officer who are trying to get on a boat to safety. They live up north in South Carolina and have to get to the seaport (Naval Weapons Station Charleston) Their main goal is to get aboard the ship to an island where they then can travel to another country. Trinity Knight: senior high school student. Trish Knight: senior high school student(told in her point of view) Spencer Johnson: senior high school student Chandler Smith: senior high school student Nathaniel Greer: Senior high school student Victor Wilson: the History teacher Rebecka Thompson: the police officer Donald Porter: the military kid Story starts out at a high school. (South Bend High School) a group of friends are staying after school shooting a video. Later they start to hear police sirens, screams, and worst of all, some of the after school students and teachers are acting strange. The faces of their peers and teachers has turned a sickly pale color and are walking overly slow! People inside and out of the school are running around and screaming their heads off, and the only thing running through this group of friends minds is Zombies! more about the characters. Characters (main) Trish Knight: main character of the story. Told in her eyes. Hard working Senior student. Very cautious and a what if person. She’s the brains of the group. She’s the advice giver. The shortest one of the group. Has Dark brown hair. Trinity Knight: Trish’s older sister. She was held back so she could graduate with her sister. She’s the one that will shoot first and ask questions later. Fights with emotion and Has a very smart mouth. Always tries to be the leader since she is older then every one else. Very tall and slender. Black hair. Has a “I will win” attitude. Spencer Johnson: The trouble maker. Always late for class and ends up in detention most of the time. Likes to start a fight. Never one to hesitate. Spiky dirty blond hair. Caucasian Chandler Smith: The Football player. Laid back kind of guy. See things for what they are accepts them. Ready to take on what lies ahead of the game. (him and Trish have a small thing for each other, as the story goes on their relationship to one another progresses) African American. Nathaniel Greer: the attention grabber. Wants everyone to know him for some great. Tries to be the hero and takes risks. (gets himself killed by trying to be the hero) African American. Victor Wilson: The serious thinker. Well organized and hard working. Very concerned for others. Not one to persuade easily. Has a medium tan complexion. Dark hair Rebecka Thompson: The warm-hearted red head. Has a strong sense of duty and responsibility. Also is a little out spoken. Some time leads with emotion. Caucasian Donald Porter: the young bleach blond haired military kid. Only interested in saving him self. Arrogant and self centered. Wants everything to go his way and to be in control. Caucasian
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Answer 1 :
It sounds interesting. I have a question though, what kind of shot is the doctors giving people? I mean to cause a lot of people to turn into zombies? It must be like a flu shot maybe? It has to be something for a lot of people to go to the doctor to get the shot in a two week period of time

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Tuesday, August 2, 2011

About A letter that needs to be checked

A letter that needs to be checked.?
this is a letter im going to send to friends and family members, but i want to see if anyone sees any corrections, or has some advice on what to add. thanks! Dear __________, This summer I have decided to travel with Nancy Harmon and the Mighty Warriors, a program that help teach and develop students. The Mighty Warriors were first organized by Nancy Harmon in 1994 with six young people. There has been over one thousand young people travel in evangelism with Miss. Harmon over the past forty years. The Warriors come and develop quickly as they are given a platform on which to express their hearts and become anointed Teachers, Preachers, Youth Pastors, Worship Leaders, or whatever God has assigned them to do. I have prayed about it and feel that God’s plan involves me traveling with Nancy Harmon and the Mighty Warriors this summer. However, in order for me to travel with Miss. Harmon this summer I have to raise $1,700 by June ($700 of that must be turned in by the end of March.) So I am asking you to donate or pledge any amount of money you can to help me reach my goal of traveling with Miss. Nancy. Everything is appreciated; if you are not able to give any money I would appreciate prayers towards this goal. Sincerely, Christopher Chandler P.S If you are interested in finding out more about Miss. Nancy and the Mighty Warriors visit nancyharmon.org.
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Dear __________, This summer I have decided to travel with Nancy Harmon and the Mighty Warriors, a program that helps teach and develop students. The Mighty Warriors were first organized by Nancy Harmon in 1994 with six young people. There have been over one thousand young people who have travelled in evangelism with Miss. Harmon over the past forty years. The Warriors develop and grow quickly as they are given a platform on which to express their hearts and become anointed Teachers, Preachers, Youth Pastors, Worship Leaders, or whatever God has assigned them to do. I have prayed about it and feel that God’s plan involves me traveling with Nancy Harmon and the Mighty Warriors this summer. However, in order for me to travel with Miss. Harmon this summer I have to raise $1,700 by June ($700 of that must be turned in by the end of March.) So I am asking if you could donate or pledge any amount of money that you can spare to help me reach my goal of traveling with Miss Nancy. Everything is appreciated; if you are not able to give any money I would appreciate prayers towards this goal. Sincerely, Christopher Chandler P.S If you are interested in finding out more about Miss. Nancy and the Mighty Warriors visit nancyharmon.org

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Saturday, July 2, 2011

About Hotel near Tempe, AZ? see list

Hotel near Tempe, AZ? see list?
We need to travel to the Tempe area for a funeral and have several hotels from our points list picked out as possibles. Need a little local advice. Traveling as a couple with our 2 teens, staying in one room together for only one night. Our hotels to pick from are as follows: Hyatt Place - Tempe Holiday Inn & Suites - Phoenix Airport (I understand this is fairly new) Holiday Inn Express - Tempe Holiday Inn Express - Mesa/Chandler Crown Plaza Resort (San Marcos Golf resort) - Chandler We do not play golf and don't anticipate having a lot of time to explore the area between travel getting there, going to the funeral, meeting with family, etc. Just looking for a decent place to spend the night where we can use our points.
Phoenix - 2 Answers
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Answer 1 :
I live in Tempe, I travel often and know the area very well. My company has also booked many people in different hotels. The best by far is the Hyatt. What wins it over the others, is that its in a better area and closer to the main section of Tempe.
Answer 2 :
Inn suites in Tempe is very nice, reasonable rates and if you do get a minute next to a great mall and right off the freeway. We have done several "staycations" there

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Thursday, June 2, 2011

About City Names for a Baby

City Names for a Baby?
So, my husband and I love to travel and want to name our baby after a city we have been to. Which name do you like best? Why? Boy: Austin Boston Chandler Dallas Dayton Eugene Gilbert Houston Jackson Lincoln Memphis Orlando Phoenix Warren Cody Easton Frederick Kingston Lawrence Mason Mitchell Trenton Girl: Alexandria Aurora Charlotte Elizabeth Madison Phoenix Savannah Campbell Cheyenne Helena Logan
Baby Names - 16 Answers
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Answer 1 :
i like: boston dayton lincoln warren cody easton kingston mason aurora elizabeth savannah
Answer 2 :
Wow. You & your husband travel a lot ! For boys, I love the names Jackson, Warren, Cody & Trenton. For girls, I love the names Charlotte & Helena. Good luck ! -----
Answer 3 :
For the boy I like Dayton, Austin or Jackson. One name I have heard that I love for girls that is not on your list is Brooklyn. I have thought of using it myself. Off your list I like Aurora and Alexandria.
Answer 4 :
Boys- Lincoln Warren Easton Trenton Girls- Charlotte Aurora
Answer 5 :
boys.... austin jackson dallas trenton lincoln girls... charlotte elizabeth savannah cheyenne
Answer 6 :
For a boy, I like Austin, Chandler, Orlando, Warren, Trenton, Mason, and Lawrence. I also like Logan, but I know that was a girl's choice. For a girl, I like Aurora and Helena. But I liked Dallas off of the names on the boy list. Logan is also cute too My choices would be Austin Lawrence, Logan (boy) Chandler, and Trenton Orlando. For a girl, I'd pick Helena Logan, or Dallas Helena. Good luck!
Answer 7 :
for a girl if she has blond hair name her savannah (it Will match her aditode ) try ellen for ellenville if she has brown hair. if she has blach hair name her alexandra p.s. never name a girl logan it`s a boys name!
Answer 8 :
Austin & Savannah
Answer 9 :
I like Dayton and Madison
Answer 10 :
love Dayton, i wanted to go with that name before i knew it was a city in America (im from Spain) still like it just when i ask on here before about that name everyone replyed that it was a lower class, poor area in Oklahoma, and it kind of put me off the way everyone was putting it down.
Answer 11 :
i like Kingston & Alexandria ,just because. i also like Sanaa (a city in Yemen) which is not on your list.
Answer 12 :
Austin- okay Boston-no Chandler-no Dallas-no Dayton-no Eugene-no way i hate it Gilbert-stupid Houston-bad Jackson-no Lincoln-bad Memphis-no Orlando-no Phoenix-no Warren-not horrible Cody-i like it Easton-okay Frederick-okay Kingston-no Lawrence-no will be nicknamed LARRY Mason-i like it Mitchell-super cute Trenton-no I like Mason and Mitchell Mason will be nicknamed mace (maybe) or just be mason and mitchell will be nicknamed mitch Mason Cody or Mitchell Cody Girl: Alexandria-cute Aurora-okay Charlotte-i like it Elizabeth-over used Madison-cute Phoenix-no Savannah-no Campbell-no Cheyenne-no Helena-no Logan-no I like madison, alexandria and aurora Madison will become maddy at school if she wants but can still be called her real name i she tells kids not to shorten it alexandria can choose any of these nicknames check this site http://www.thinkbabynames.com/meaning/0/Alexandra Aurora will maybe be nicknamed rori if she wants Make sure you like the possible nicknames Alexandria Cheyenne Madison Elizabeth Aurora Charlotte
Answer 13 :
Wow! You guys have been to so many places! I personally like (as names)... Boys: Austin Houston Jackson Lincoln Cody Mason Mitchell Trenton Girls: Alexandria Aurora Charlotte Elizabeth Madison Cheyenne Helena Maybe pick a name (city) that you guys have very good memories? Or something special happened at the time that you guys were visiting? Oh, have you been to Brooklyn? That's a cute girl name =)
Answer 14 :
For a boy, I like Jackson. And for a girl, Savannah.
Answer 15 :
for boys i only like Jackson and Mason Girls: Madison Savannah Logan and i also like Dallas, but on a girl good luck =]
Answer 16 :
for the boys i love : warren Trenton Phoenix(unique and cute) and Austin for girls i love: Aurora Charlotte Phoenix(again) Cheyenne Helena good luck they are all different names but very cute so they wont be made fun of but they wont be surrounded by like 4 different Sarahs or Mikes theyll have their own unique name try combining some of those names to middle names like Aurora Phoenix Cheyenne Logan Charlotte Elizabeth Warren Phoenix Trenton Dallas Austin Jackson

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Monday, May 2, 2011

About Jeffrey Bernard is Unwell and Living in London

Jeffrey Bernard is Unwell and Living in London??????
And so was Joy Gresham (`Nobody wants to treat a Jewish lady`) and Sylvia Plath and Judy Garland and Mama Cass...And Ava Gardner. Even Raymond Chandler, another American...and a great, great one...died ignominiously and without medical attention looked after by locals in an Eaton Square basement flat. (poss the same one as I) Garland died of a heart attack; had obviously been to the local surgery and been told to `take an aspirin and ring me in the morning`; because neighbours recall seeing her and in some distress on the nite that she putatively committed suicide. Why the HELL doesn`t the richest country on earth have an American hospital in London and why the HELL don`t they make a big stink when the British treat Americans like scum in need of medical attention? Instead the Americans force us to travel half way around the world to attend a tribunal which ipso facto exonerates British negligence. Complicity? Who knows!
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Answer 1 :
If you don't like it here, you could always go home. You don't HAVE to have medical insurance to get medical assistance in this country. But because of that, many people come here for free treatment, putting a burden on our resources. If all the freeloaders went home (or were charged before they were treated), our NHS might be in a better state than it is now

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