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this is a letter im going to send to friends and family members, but i want to see if anyone sees any corrections, or has some advice on what to add. thanks! Dear __________, This summer I have decided to travel with Nancy Harmon and the Mighty Warriors, a program that help teach and develop students. The Mighty Warriors were first organized by Nancy Harmon in 1994 with six young people. There has been over one thousand young people travel in evangelism with Miss. Harmon over the past forty years. The Warriors come and develop quickly as they are given a platform on which to express their hearts and become anointed Teachers, Preachers, Youth Pastors, Worship Leaders, or whatever God has assigned them to do. I have prayed about it and feel that God’s plan involves me traveling with Nancy Harmon and the Mighty Warriors this summer. However, in order for me to travel with Miss. Harmon this summer I have to raise $1,700 by June ($700 of that must be turned in by the end of March.) So I am asking you to donate or pledge any amount of money you can to help me reach my goal of traveling with Miss. Nancy. Everything is appreciated; if you are not able to give any money I would appreciate prayers towards this goal. Sincerely, Christopher Chandler P.S If you are interested in finding out more about Miss. Nancy and the Mighty Warriors visit nancyharmon.org.
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Dear __________, This summer I have decided to travel with Nancy Harmon and the Mighty Warriors, a program that helps teach and develop students. The Mighty Warriors were first organized by Nancy Harmon in 1994 with six young people. There have been over one thousand young people who have travelled in evangelism with Miss. Harmon over the past forty years. The Warriors develop and grow quickly as they are given a platform on which to express their hearts and become anointed Teachers, Preachers, Youth Pastors, Worship Leaders, or whatever God has assigned them to do. I have prayed about it and feel that God’s plan involves me traveling with Nancy Harmon and the Mighty Warriors this summer. However, in order for me to travel with Miss. Harmon this summer I have to raise $1,700 by June ($700 of that must be turned in by the end of March.) So I am asking if you could donate or pledge any amount of money that you can spare to help me reach my goal of traveling with Miss Nancy. Everything is appreciated; if you are not able to give any money I would appreciate prayers towards this goal. Sincerely, Christopher Chandler P.S If you are interested in finding out more about Miss. Nancy and the Mighty Warriors visit nancyharmon.org
this is a letter im going to send to friends and family members, but i want to see if anyone sees any corrections, or has some advice on what to add. thanks! Dear __________, This summer I have decided to travel with Nancy Harmon and the Mighty Warriors, a program that help teach and develop students. The Mighty Warriors were first organized by Nancy Harmon in 1994 with six young people. There has been over one thousand young people travel in evangelism with Miss. Harmon over the past forty years. The Warriors come and develop quickly as they are given a platform on which to express their hearts and become anointed Teachers, Preachers, Youth Pastors, Worship Leaders, or whatever God has assigned them to do. I have prayed about it and feel that God’s plan involves me traveling with Nancy Harmon and the Mighty Warriors this summer. However, in order for me to travel with Miss. Harmon this summer I have to raise $1,700 by June ($700 of that must be turned in by the end of March.) So I am asking you to donate or pledge any amount of money you can to help me reach my goal of traveling with Miss. Nancy. Everything is appreciated; if you are not able to give any money I would appreciate prayers towards this goal. Sincerely, Christopher Chandler P.S If you are interested in finding out more about Miss. Nancy and the Mighty Warriors visit nancyharmon.org.
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Dear __________, This summer I have decided to travel with Nancy Harmon and the Mighty Warriors, a program that helps teach and develop students. The Mighty Warriors were first organized by Nancy Harmon in 1994 with six young people. There have been over one thousand young people who have travelled in evangelism with Miss. Harmon over the past forty years. The Warriors develop and grow quickly as they are given a platform on which to express their hearts and become anointed Teachers, Preachers, Youth Pastors, Worship Leaders, or whatever God has assigned them to do. I have prayed about it and feel that God’s plan involves me traveling with Nancy Harmon and the Mighty Warriors this summer. However, in order for me to travel with Miss. Harmon this summer I have to raise $1,700 by June ($700 of that must be turned in by the end of March.) So I am asking if you could donate or pledge any amount of money that you can spare to help me reach my goal of traveling with Miss Nancy. Everything is appreciated; if you are not able to give any money I would appreciate prayers towards this goal. Sincerely, Christopher Chandler P.S If you are interested in finding out more about Miss. Nancy and the Mighty Warriors visit nancyharmon.org
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