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I'm writing a zombie story called Undead Encounters here's the plot of the story and what i have so far. The rise of a zombie attack only happening in America. Doctors have been putting viruses in shots (without knowing) that cause severe damage to the brain and kills that person within two weeks of injection. That said person then comes back alive with a severe hunger for human flesh. Story revolves around 6 teenagers, a teacher, and a police officer who are trying to get on a boat to safety. They live up north in South Carolina and have to get to the seaport (Naval Weapons Station Charleston) Their main goal is to get aboard the ship to an island where they then can travel to another country. Trinity Knight: senior high school student. Trish Knight: senior high school student(told in her point of view) Spencer Johnson: senior high school student Chandler Smith: senior high school student Nathaniel Greer: Senior high school student Victor Wilson: the History teacher Rebecka Thompson: the police officer Donald Porter: the military kid Story starts out at a high school. (South Bend High School) a group of friends are staying after school shooting a video. Later they start to hear police sirens, screams, and worst of all, some of the after school students and teachers are acting strange. The faces of their peers and teachers has turned a sickly pale color and are walking overly slow! People inside and out of the school are running around and screaming their heads off, and the only thing running through this group of friends minds is Zombies! more about the characters. Characters (main) Trish Knight: main character of the story. Told in her eyes. Hard working Senior student. Very cautious and a what if person. She’s the brains of the group. She’s the advice giver. The shortest one of the group. Has Dark brown hair. Trinity Knight: Trish’s older sister. She was held back so she could graduate with her sister. She’s the one that will shoot first and ask questions later. Fights with emotion and Has a very smart mouth. Always tries to be the leader since she is older then every one else. Very tall and slender. Black hair. Has a “I will win” attitude. Spencer Johnson: The trouble maker. Always late for class and ends up in detention most of the time. Likes to start a fight. Never one to hesitate. Spiky dirty blond hair. Caucasian Chandler Smith: The Football player. Laid back kind of guy. See things for what they are accepts them. Ready to take on what lies ahead of the game. (him and Trish have a small thing for each other, as the story goes on their relationship to one another progresses) African American. Nathaniel Greer: the attention grabber. Wants everyone to know him for some great. Tries to be the hero and takes risks. (gets himself killed by trying to be the hero) African American. Victor Wilson: The serious thinker. Well organized and hard working. Very concerned for others. Not one to persuade easily. Has a medium tan complexion. Dark hair Rebecka Thompson: The warm-hearted red head. Has a strong sense of duty and responsibility. Also is a little out spoken. Some time leads with emotion. Caucasian Donald Porter: the young bleach blond haired military kid. Only interested in saving him self. Arrogant and self centered. Wants everything to go his way and to be in control. Caucasian
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It sounds interesting. I have a question though, what kind of shot is the doctors giving people? I mean to cause a lot of people to turn into zombies? It must be like a flu shot maybe? It has to be something for a lot of people to go to the doctor to get the shot in a two week period of time

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